Someone comes along and writes up
I LIKE GRILS
Someone else crosses out GRILS and writes
Yet another wag comes along and writes underneath
WOTS WRONG WITH US GRILS?
This is ancient, and versions are widely cited—but like a haiku it shouldn’t be spelled out too laboriously.
OK then, here’s another haiku:
Wots wrong with us grils?
Someone comes along and writes—
Oops, missed the first line
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